Any song writers on here?

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  • govolz
    SBR Wise Guy
    • 03-26-12
    • 952

    #1
    Any song writers on here?
    Fig y'all might like this. First song I ever wrote and me and my buddy recorded it. Working on a new one now. Check it out let me know what ya think. Don't judge too bad either haha this is our first song! Click on the second one

  • Roadtrip635
    SBR Hall of Famer
    • 12-07-10
    • 6129

    #2
    Not bad, especially for a first song. Definitely shows some promise.
    The guitar did sound a bit out of tune, the snare needed to be softened a little and bring the vocals up a little, but overall a good effort.
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    • govolz
      SBR Wise Guy
      • 03-26-12
      • 952

      #3
      Thanks that wasn't me singing I was mainly talking about the lyrics I wrote it and a buddy sung it. We added the snare in on a program. It was just our first one we recorded so we didn't put a lot of effort. About to do another one tho
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      • Roadtrip635
        SBR Hall of Famer
        • 12-07-10
        • 6129

        #4
        The song itself was pretty good, especially for a first time. Just keep writing and always remember to always write down some cool phrase, idea or lyrics when they come to you. You always think you'll remember them later, but then they're gone when you try to remember them. GL and have fun!
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        • GUMMO77
          SBR Hall of Famer
          • 08-23-10
          • 9294

          #5
          Not bad man. To be honest, I like the lyrics better than the guys voice. GL
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          • govolz
            SBR Wise Guy
            • 03-26-12
            • 952

            #6
            I do road thanks! And thanks gummo he's bad a on the guitar just not a great singer but it was cool. I'm workin on one now when I get done with it I'll post it
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