---SBR Rap Song In The Works!---

**Ninersnut** · 01-21-11, 12:39 PM

Hardest part is the hook. Without the hook this is doomed.

You should incorp. some point stiffs into it as well as scam books. Might want to degrade Shari in it as well.

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 01:11 PM

Gothca Niner, point stiffs are in and mentioned Shari too. WiII work on scam books, any particuIar ones you have in mind?

**keyboarding** · 01-21-11, 02:51 PM

It's good that you want to do this but you should come to terms with the fact that practically no one else gives a fukk about what you are doing. Not trying to discourage you, just seems like you're a half decent person, seems wrong for you to become so enthusiastic about something that no one else will even notice and will, more than anything, insult you for.

God bless.

**onetrickpony** · 01-21-11, 02:52 PM

i give a fuk deewizzle, i give a fuk

**King Mayan** · 01-21-11, 02:54 PM

Originally posted by keyboarding

It's good that you want to do this but you should come to terms with the fact that practically no one else gives a fukk about what you are doing. Not trying to discourage you, just seems like you're a half decent person, seems wrong for you to become so enthusiastic about something that no one else will even notice and will, more than anything, insult you for.

God bless.

Negative mofo..

**Ninersnut** · 01-21-11, 03:01 PM

Haters want to hate.
Lovers want to love.
I don't even want.....
None of theeee above

**stealthyburrito** · 01-21-11, 03:19 PM

let me get a shoutout, love hip hop.

praise, bash, trash i don't care.

**WvGambler** · 01-21-11, 03:26 PM

Shout out to wvgambler...gotta have sbrs resident country boy mentioned.

**jjgold** · 01-21-11, 03:40 PM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

I've been thinking about this for a whiIe now and figured it's about that time. I aIready have haIf a verse done and I wiII record it myseIf on my oId Akai 16 track. I wiII record it over one of my originaI beats ( no sampIes ) I made on my Yamaha Motif. AII my beats are copywritten and pubIished through ASCAP. I use to rap in high schooI but focus on producing now so don't give me any shit if I don't win a Grammy.

The 1st 8 bars of verse 1 are on JJ cuz he is the easiest to write about... Give me some ideas, punch Iines on posters you think shouId be incIuded, or just Iet me know if you want a shout out. It wiII be 3 16 bar verses with a 8 bar hook. Shoot me some Ideas of what you think the hook (chorus) shouId be about and I wiII try to incorporate as many suggestions for the song as possibIe.

Go.

Could be a classic if done right

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 04:58 PM

I got u Stealthy, u too Gambler.

Thanks for the kind words Keyboarding.

JJ, this will be done right.

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 05:02 PM

Thanks pony, I'll be sure to work u in.

**stealthyburrito** · 01-21-11, 05:32 PM

This is gonna be some real gangsta shit.

Gl with the project dee.

**Tree Rollins** · 01-21-11, 05:50 PM

Rap about gdooms tie.

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 06:01 PM

Originally posted by Tree Rollins

Rap about gdooms tie.

That's a must...

Just about done with the 1st verse. Don't wanna rush it just in case anyone eIse has some input or shoutout requests, which prob won't happen since keyboarding said practicaIIy no one gives a fuk...

**onetrickpony** · 01-21-11, 06:02 PM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

That's a must... Just about done with the 1st verse. Don't wanna rush it just in case anyone eIse has some input or shoutout requests, which prob won't happen since keyboarding said practicaIIy no one gives a fuk...

did u use any of my verses?

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 06:16 PM

CouIdn't use anything yet since I aIready have the 1st verse format. I'II try to throw something in there... I Need more of an idea or roast Iike tree said "rap about gdooms tie"

**onetrickpony** · 01-21-11, 06:22 PM

get on fishheads old ass

bobby is a 21 yr virgin

get on some candien posters

samsncharge99 is down -45 in nba this year

ttrace35 spent 7 years in rikers taking it up the ass

mention the crazy warrior bros

cant forget the only women at sbr shari and nina

lets go dee

**BettingGeek** · 01-21-11, 06:22 PM

lol, i love it, and JJ will do a video clip ....

**YorkHunt** · 01-21-11, 06:24 PM

Suicide whatever, your still scum!
Degenerate Gamblers, SBR's where the come!

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 06:32 PM

Originally posted by onetrickpony

get on fishheads old ass

bobby is a 21 yr virgin

get on some candien posters

samsncharge99 is down -45 in nba this year

ttrace35 spent 7 years in rikers taking it up the ass

mention the crazy warrior bros

cant forget the only women at sbr shari and nina

lets go dee

Now I can use that.

Originally posted by YorkHunt

Suicide whatever, your still scum!
Degenerate Gamblers, SBR's where the come!

I Iike that.

**YorkHunt** · 01-21-11, 06:35 PM

Your hook can be:

SBR POINTS GIMME EM!
SBR POINTS GIMME EM OR IM TAKING THEM
SBR POINTS GIMME EM!
SBR POINTS GIMME EM OR IM TAKING THEM

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 06:45 PM

Verse 1 done...

**onetrickpony** · 01-21-11, 06:47 PM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

Verse 1 done...

**losturmarbles** · 01-21-11, 06:58 PM

Can we get JJ to beatbox in the background?

**Junkyard Dog** · 01-21-11, 07:02 PM

cool man, lookin forward to it!

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 07:05 PM

Thanks guys... Gonna take a break and watch a movie with my son. I'II start working on the hook and second verse when he faIIs asIeep...

You guys gave me some good Ideas for the 2nd verse, keep em coming..

**Dad** · 01-21-11, 07:09 PM

I'll take a shout. Make sure to mention my bitches and hoes. This is going to be fantasic. I'm also hitting 73% of my ncaab plays, let the world know.

**robmpink** · 01-21-11, 07:11 PM

will u get crunk?

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 07:18 PM

Originally posted by Dad

I'll take a shout. Make sure to mention my bitches and hoes. This is going to be fantasic. I'm also hitting 73% of my ncaab plays, let the world know.

AIready got you and your bitches Dad, 3rd bar verse 1

**Cougar Bait** · 01-21-11, 07:20 PM

Every poster should want to be included in this project, it could be classic

I think a good start is taking care of the lifers...the guys that have pretty high post counts

Then work your way through the characters of SBR, and there are plenty

Don't forget Beantown Jim

**shaggy3000** · 01-21-11, 07:23 PM

give me a shout out and my sexy av.

**onetrickpony** · 01-21-11, 07:24 PM

there should be a diss toward keyboard or after the song, get his non supportive ass

**DeeWizzle** · 01-21-11, 07:33 PM

Originally posted by Cougar Bait

Every poster should want to be included in this project, it could be classic

I think a good start is taking care of the lifers...the guys that have pretty high post counts

Then work your way through the characters of SBR, and there are plenty

Don't forget Beantown Jim

Thanks Cougar. It's kinda hard mention posters in order of seniority when the pens moving and Ideas fIowing but I'II do my best to get everyone in.

Originally posted by shaggy3000

give me a shout out and my sexy av.

Got u shaggy

Originally posted by onetrickpony

there should be a diss toward keyboard or after the song, get his non supportive ass

AIready did, he made it too easy for me Pony. OnIy spent a coupIe bars on him, didn't feeI Iike waisting too much time on it but I had to say something.

**keyboarding** · 01-21-11, 07:39 PM

You really want to insult me because I think it's kind of pathetic a grown man (with a child nonetheless) is putting so much time and effort into something like this? Well, go for it just know that I'm better with words than you and far more intelligent so take it easy.

Before you try to launch your career as SBR's first recording artist why not invest in a keyboard that works, you fukk?

God bless.