Gambling Article I wrote for a College Class

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  • SamsNCharge99
    SBR Aristocracy
    • 10-22-08
    • 41244

    #1
    Gambling Article I wrote for a College Class


    Online Gambling has become more popular each year and the amount of young kids that gamble through this method is dangerously increasing as well. Kids have watched poker on TV since 2003, and see how much money they are winning and think to themselves that its easy, so why not try it themselves. So, they learn the game of poker and play with their friends. They beat their friends for maybe $5 or $10 and think, let's play this online and then I can really make some money. These guys on TV play online and win money, why can't I.

    In an article written by April Spurlock in 2004, she stated that online gambling has skyrocketed. "It went from one online site to over 1400 in less than a year." She went on saying that it's so much easier for kids to play online rather than drive to a casino. They can have the same thrill from their computer at home.

    The problem is, it's not so easy as it looks. A person will put money on say a poker site or maybe even sports betting site. They watch sports and pick the winners of the game, so it must be just as easy to make money that way. Let's say for example, they throw $1000 onto two different online websites. $500 on poker and $500 on sports betting. They win some, lose some for a couple weeks. Overall, they are down a little. They try to win it back and bet bigger bets and lose those bets. A few losses later and bigger bets later and all of a sudden, they have NO MONEY. They re-deposit to try and win that money back they lost and now they are BURIED. The problem is with most young people is that they can't stop. It's the thrill of gambling that keeps them into the game. They lost at first, but think they can beat the game. They played stupid at first, but the next time around I will do better.

    What most don't realize that this is a wide variety of sports/games that can be bet. This is not good. A person starts betting NFL or MLB games, lose some money and want to win it back before the next game. So, they throw it on maybe a soccer game or tennis match thinking it's a sure win. That "sure win" game loses and again, they are BURIED IN DEEP. Money that has been saved for years slowly decreases and now one finds themselves not paying attention to school work or family. All that matters is making that money back they lose plus maybe even some more.

    And once a person gambles to try and win money back they lost, they already lost again. You can't think that way or you will be betting with your head rather than your heart. Yes, those are two TOTALLY different things. Betting smart and with your heart is how smart gamblers play. When you bet with your head, all you are thinking about is making money up that you lost in the past and you bet dumb. This makes you lose even more and eventually you are in way over your head and turn to illegal activites to try and get money to play. A 2006 study has shown that 59% of kids b/t 18-22 that lose money gambling online have lost more than $20,000.

    And where do these kids come up with $20,000?? Loan sharks, bookies, stealing. However these kids get the money, most times it's by illegal activites such as a loan shark or stealing. And they are only doing this to gamble it back and try and win back the money. It's a never ending cycle until 1 of 2 things happen. You end up in jail, or you end up DEAD because you couldn't pay back the loan shark you borrowed money from and he sent someone to kill you or rough you up.

    Online gambling is a DANGEROUS way that many teens lose all their money. Not only is it illegal but a way to ruin your life. You should only play if you have good money management skills and can handle the ups and downs.

    Society needs to know about this because it could be affecting your own friends and family members. If you have a friend that you feel is having problems with gambling, you should get help IMMEDIATELY. Don't let the situation esculate into something they can't control. The first step in dealing with a gambling problem or any problem is admitting. Most will admit they have a problem, but will also say they have it under control, when in reality they don't. Stop the problem before something bad happens and your friend ends up DEAD due to debt or in jail.
  • Bread
    SBR Posting Legend
    • 03-16-08
    • 23726

    #2
    Was this actually a graded assignment?
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    • Chi_archie
      SBR Aristocracy
      • 07-22-08
      • 63183

      #3
      nice to do work for school in a subject matter that you enjoy. Needs some proofing and spell checking, especially around the word loss, lose, losses, loses ect.

      this article reveals some interesting insights into the inner workings or your mind Sammy
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      • compaqDikk
        SBR Hall of Famer
        • 10-08-05
        • 5699

        #4
        i am one the phone now with the dean at Pittsburg St.
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        • Chi_archie
          SBR Aristocracy
          • 07-22-08
          • 63183

          #5
          plattsburg compaq, plattsburg
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          • TheBeautifulGame
            SBR MVP
            • 08-26-08
            • 1286

            #6
            Very true what you have written. It will affect teens for sure but the above affects fully grown adults aslo. Thumbs up for the write up
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            • jjgold
              SBR Aristocracy
              • 07-20-05
              • 388208

              #7
              Lol compactor

              Sammy you should of put in article that your a fukkin victim of I also and your a compulsive gambler youself.
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              • jellobiafra
                SBR Hall of Famer
                • 03-08-09
                • 6291

                #8
                I'm with Archie. I hope this wasn't an English paper. Not the worst thing ever by any means, but a lot of little mistakes. Next time submit it to the board before you turn it in and I'll edit for you.
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                • Chi_archie
                  SBR Aristocracy
                  • 07-22-08
                  • 63183

                  #9
                  R. Scholar is good for editing....
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                  • SamsNCharge99
                    SBR Aristocracy
                    • 10-22-08
                    • 41244

                    #10
                    I just wrote it and posted it. I went back and did some editing. Plus, it's supposed to be a blog sort of thing.

                    I post it on that website and fellow classmates write their opinions on what I wrote. The teacher game up 40 options to choose from and obv. I wrote about this topic.

                    JJ....I didn't mention my name, but this story sorta has some truths about my story
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                    • rake922
                      SBR Posting Legend
                      • 12-23-07
                      • 11692

                      #11
                      Does he get 15 SBR pts ? Willie?
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                      • Chi_archie
                        SBR Aristocracy
                        • 07-22-08
                        • 63183

                        #12
                        Not only is it illegal but a way to ruin your life. You should only play if you have good money management skills and can handle the ups and downs.




                        the Illegal part doesn't seem to be a problem for potential gambling teens for Sammy
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                        • Mikail
                          SBR Posting Legend
                          • 07-19-09
                          • 21689

                          #13
                          substance of the essay is excellent. Good writing.
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                          • Intuitive_Edge
                            SBR MVP
                            • 07-22-09
                            • 1644

                            #14
                            Thats just a drop in the bucket in terms of info when it comes to this hobby and realistically investment. Its not just money management.. it goes far beyond that. You have balls if you really are submitting that for a grade
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                            • jjgold
                              SBR Aristocracy
                              • 07-20-05
                              • 388208

                              #15
                              Willy give him 20 points you cheap fuk
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                              • Bread
                                SBR Posting Legend
                                • 03-16-08
                                • 23726

                                #16
                                Originally posted by jjgold
                                Willy give him 20 points you cheap fuk

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                                • Docta Ignoranti
                                  SBR High Roller
                                  • 08-26-09
                                  • 141

                                  #17
                                  I also write a small weblog that is related to sports betting and sports news if you guys get bored. Feel free to comment.

                                  Just another WordPress.com weblog
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                                  • topgame85
                                    SBR Posting Legend
                                    • 03-30-08
                                    • 12325

                                    #18
                                    unreal Sammy so are you quitting the game or just realize the trouble it causes us all
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                                    • SamsNCharge99
                                      SBR Aristocracy
                                      • 10-22-08
                                      • 41244

                                      #19
                                      I never said I'm quitting

                                      the assignment was a small article on Gambling , so I wrote a small article on Gambling and the dangers
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                                      • Docta Ignoranti
                                        SBR High Roller
                                        • 08-26-09
                                        • 141

                                        #20
                                        Hang in there Sam, keep it simple and don't worry about the critics. We all have to start somewhere...
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                                        • tacomax
                                          SBR Hall of Famer
                                          • 08-10-05
                                          • 9619

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by SamsNCharge99
                                          the assignment was a small article on Gambling , so I wrote a small article on Gambling and the dangers
                                          You could have saved yourself the hassle of writing that and just submitted one of Bobby's youtube vids.
                                          Originally posted by pags11
                                          SBR would never get rid of me...ever...
                                          Originally posted by BuddyBear
                                          I'd probably most likely chose Pags to jack off too.
                                          Originally posted by curious
                                          taco is not a troll, he is a bubonic plague bacteria.
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                                          • keyboarding
                                            SBR Hall of Famer
                                            • 07-30-09
                                            • 6817

                                            #22
                                            What college do you go to? I'd fail if I submitted this.

                                            I'm not even sure what point you're getting across. Great access with modern technology will increase the chance of gambling addictions? I don't agree with that at all. Look at any kind of addiction, greater access doesn't drive the addiction, it's something psychological. All because liquor stores are open 24 hours doesn't mean more people will become alcoholics, it just means existing alcoholics now have more access to their addiction.

                                            Online gambling is a DANGEROUS way that many teens lose all their money. Not only is it illegal but a way to ruin your life. You should only play if you have good money management skills and can handle the ups and downs.
                                            That statement contradicts itself. More importantly, if you don't have management skills and are emotionally unstable, everything is dangerous.

                                            Your implication that gambling is a slippery slope is a stretch, and your hypothetical situation is fear mongering worst case scenarios.
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                                            • RogueScholar
                                              SBR Hall of Famer
                                              • 02-05-07
                                              • 5082

                                              #23
                                              I'm trying to find something nice to say, but the writing is pretty atrocious. Now, I'll also concede that I'm a very tough critic when it comes to the written word, most especially to prose, and even more so to academic writing. Sammy's got a good handle on the topic, but the voice isn't consistent through the piece and all too often a lesser phrase is offered for nothing more than expedience's sake. I really wished our secondary schools better prepared students as writers before kicking them loose to college.
                                              Originally posted by StraitShooter
                                              90% of the guys dont give a shit about your problems..and the other 10 are glad you have them..
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                                              • InTheHole
                                                SBR Posting Legend
                                                • 04-28-08
                                                • 15243

                                                #24
                                                Probably one of the finer pieces of work that has be submitted to the SBR annuals
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                                                • compaqDikk
                                                  SBR Hall of Famer
                                                  • 10-08-05
                                                  • 5699

                                                  #25
                                                  does Platesburgh St. encourage using ALL CAPS in essays? wtf?

                                                  GA should have also been brought up in the article

                                                  sammy you deserve a 25 point reduction for this shitt article
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                                                  • RogueScholar
                                                    SBR Hall of Famer
                                                    • 02-05-07
                                                    • 5082

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by Chi_archie
                                                    R. Scholar is good for editing....
                                                    At least Onner gave me something to work with. It was a little ugly, but all the points made were supported with good citations and the structure was sound, and while editing the minor details was tedious, I felt like both of us got something from the process. I don't know what I could do with this except to give specific instructions on what doesn't work and say to re-write from scratch. This isn't even really an essay, it's an anecdote written in the third person.
                                                    Originally posted by StraitShooter
                                                    90% of the guys dont give a shit about your problems..and the other 10 are glad you have them..
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                                                    • Docta Ignoranti
                                                      SBR High Roller
                                                      • 08-26-09
                                                      • 141

                                                      #27
                                                      Originally posted by compaqDikk
                                                      does Platesburgh St. encourage using ALL CAPS in essays? wtf?

                                                      GA should have also been brought up in the article

                                                      sammy you deserve a 25 point reduction for this shitt article
                                                      hahahaha, poor kid...harsh, but yeah its true...
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                                                      • Trojan
                                                        SBR Sharp
                                                        • 02-18-08
                                                        • 399

                                                        #28
                                                        You forgot to put in the part about you exposing your cock on a video for a bunch of gamblers.
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                                                        • Willie Bee
                                                          SBR Posting Legend
                                                          • 02-14-06
                                                          • 15726

                                                          #29
                                                          See Dick.

                                                          See Dick gamble.

                                                          See Dick lose entire savings.

                                                          Bad Dick.

                                                          See Jane.

                                                          See Jane get mad at Dick for gambling away childrens' college fund.

                                                          See Jane's attorney.

                                                          See Jane's attorney take Dick for all he's worth in divorce court.

                                                          See Jane and attorney after trial enjoying margaritas and celebrating Dick's demise.

                                                          See Jane and attorney check into motel out on edge of town.

                                                          See Jane smile.

                                                          Good dick.
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                                                          • mathdotcom
                                                            SBR Posting Legend
                                                            • 03-24-08
                                                            • 11689

                                                            #30
                                                            Horseshit article, this is what they expect from you in 6th grade

                                                            sammy obviously in some kind of special needs college
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                                                            • Deuce
                                                              BARRELED IN @ SBR!
                                                              • 01-12-08
                                                              • 29843

                                                              #31
                                                              This would be fine for a speech, for a written essay, this is expected of an 8th grader.
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                                                              • tullamore
                                                                SBR MVP
                                                                • 07-17-07
                                                                • 3586

                                                                #32
                                                                Where is the structure to the essay or blog? Sammy you are all over the place. Didn't you take a writing 101 class as a freshman? Or were you too busy making videos.
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                                                                • reno cool
                                                                  SBR MVP
                                                                  • 07-02-08
                                                                  • 3567

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by mathdotcom
                                                                  Horseshit article, this is what they expect from you in 6th grade

                                                                  sammy obviously in some kind of special needs college

                                                                  that's about right. Considering your involvement in this forum and interaction with real gamblers you should be able to do much, much better. There is little perspective or point to the article, or any creativity.
                                                                  bird bird da bird's da word
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                                                                  • Fischnasty
                                                                    SBR MVP
                                                                    • 02-10-09
                                                                    • 1931

                                                                    #34
                                                                    unreal how bad this "essay" was. im guessing this was a joke of some kind, nothing that was actually ever submitted for a class.
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                                                                    • DrStale
                                                                      SBR Hall of Famer
                                                                      • 12-07-08
                                                                      • 9692

                                                                      #35
                                                                      While it is pretty lousy writing, I will give you credit for putting yourself out there knowing you're going to take some criticism.

                                                                      Applying your conclusions to your own life wouldn't be a bad idea either.
                                                                      Originally posted by Dark Horse
                                                                      If with religion you mean belief system, your belief system is your religion. Again, it matters not what it is. You believe in it, you are loyal to it, would defend it, and yet have no proof of it, other than that, at one point or another, you chose to believe in it. Self-hypnosis. What if there were a snapping of fingers that broke the hypnosis?
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