Chicago Bulls - Good Write Up

[pokerwhiz90]

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Hey SBR,

I know you guys know that I've been active in this forum and supportive. I just wanted to submit a good article that I wrote up on the Chicago Bulls, and I think it's really helpful to know some of the figures and stats I wrote in the articles when you consider betting on the Bulls.

[baldur]

thank you, friend.

[pokerwhiz90]

no problem baldur! i've learned a lot from this forum too! Handicapping has made me a better analyst and sports mind.

[pokerwhiz90]

Do you guys think I should continue this thread or start a new thread about my NBA analysis?

[hawley]

Whats the purpose of the article?

Just a write up about the Bulls?

[Love The Action]

I agree. No offense, but you could organize your writing a little better. Remember, clearly set your theme for the article in the introduction, then support it with facts, set forth your analysis of the facts and then end with a conclusion which supports your overall theme.

Good luck!

[NBA_Brosuf]

You can also be bias by throwing in a few hidden key lines to who you think you will favor in such games. Just like a painting by an artist. They have hidden clues thus why each artist have their own styles.

[pokerwhiz90]

yup, just a write up about the bulls, if anyone is on the procomputergambler site, my articles will be on there and a few other sites as well too

thanks for the good advice though, real supportive here
ill continue to post articles and work on my writing - i was trying my best to incorporate subplots into the bulls/heat article

just wanted to share something since i've been following the nba closely