Originally posted by Robin Shot
1) Capitalize "it's"
2) Insert "that" before "a guy" to make it a relative clause
3) Spell out numbers less than 10
4) Change the preposition "on" to "in" before "sports forums" - though I'll let that one slide, because it's debatable, but you already used "on" three (not 3) words previously, so it just looks sloppy.
And from your previous post, "Nouns need articles". Do they? The word "nouns" is itself a noun - where's the article?
Do you see how pretentious grammar, punctuation, style, and mere typo correcting is IN a forum like this? I just point these errors out because I know you don't want to sound uneducated... You're not completely unintelligent - obviously brighter than the troll you so admire, but you're not nearly as clever as you wish to come across as, and no amount of scarfs in your closet (or cupboard if you prefer), will change that.
Let's get back to sportsbetting.