SBR Rap (credit to deewizzle)

**mdemps9190** · 03-29-11, 05:41 PM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

I would if I could John. I fractured a rib 3 weeks ago and the Dr said its gonna be another 3-6 weeks before he takes me off light duty. My funds aren't looking good right now so don't know if I'll be able to make it... If I can get down there somehow I would love to... I am honored that you would ask me to perform though...

Like SBR picked up Paco, they should pay for this guys tickets to CR! GREAT JOB again!

**PAYTON20** · 03-29-11, 05:48 PM

Awesome

You do sound like a professional...you sound like Xzibit actually

**jjgold** · 03-29-11, 05:55 PM

**Cougar Bait** · 03-29-11, 06:07 PM

JJ he is poster of the month and if he doesn't win everyone here will be pissed

It's over

POTM

**stevek173** · 03-29-11, 06:36 PM

Wow, just wow.

POTM

thanks for the shout out that ******* killed me lmao

**shaggy3000** · 03-29-11, 06:58 PM

damn i made it in the song, in the strip club, and even helped on the hook.

great song for real. figured if you knew what you were doing it could turn out well but that was way better than i thought.

somehow we got to shoot a video for it!

**DeeWizzle** · 03-29-11, 07:54 PM

Thanx for aII the support guys, It's amazing, truIy amazing!!!

**gavin** · 03-29-11, 08:34 PM

shit was on point, creative hook and funny lyrics. potm lock of the year

**Bo$$ Bet$** · 03-29-11, 09:06 PM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

Thanx for aII the support guys, It's amazing, truIy amazing!!!

where can i dl this on itunes?

for real though BO$$

**sickler** · 03-29-11, 09:08 PM

WOW Deewizzle, that was impressive!

You have talent sir.

**DeeWizzle** · 03-29-11, 09:52 PM

Originally posted by gavin

shit was on point, creative hook and funny lyrics. potm lock of the year

Originally posted by Bo$$ Bet$

where can i dl this on itunes?

for real though BO$$

Not sure if you can downIoad off youtube, but if not you can shoot me ur emaiI n I'II send it to you...

Originally posted by sickler

WOW Deewizzle, that was impressive!

You have talent sir.

Thanks SickIer, much appreciated...

**ebbearsfb1** · 03-29-11, 09:58 PM

didnt make it, un real

turn 50 bucks into 2k and no love

**DeeWizzle** · 03-29-11, 10:11 PM

Originally posted by ebbearsfb1

didnt make it, un real

turn 50 bucks into 2k and no love

Sorry Eb, I started a thread about this some time back asking who wanted to be in it, didn't get too many responses though.. Pretty much everyone in it repIied n the rest I just worked in....

I'm working on something right now per Paco's request and I'II try n work you and a few others in....

What name do you want me to use? Eb, Bear, Fb? Ebbearsfb1 is a mouthfuII in a rhyme... Iemme kno

**DeeWizzle** · 03-30-11, 04:45 AM

Otp, SteaIthy, good Iookin out. You both had my back way before this song even came out and I appreciate the support for reaI.

SteaIthy, thanks for gettin the song posted. It got my pen moving again and if I decide to post any more songs on the board or not, I'II shoot you guys a copy. I wrote 2 songs tonight,might record tomorrow if my ribs aIIow me to and If I have enough patience to mess with that 16 track with the broken buttons... Everytime I want to overdub something I have to power everything down and reboot it.... Damn I need a Mac Pro!

**Goat Milk** · 03-30-11, 05:21 AM

amazing.

can the next one be more literary like lupe fiasco/nas lyrics?

**Goat Milk** · 03-30-11, 05:25 AM

they would use a simple catchy beat like this what do you think

**DeeWizzle** · 03-30-11, 05:33 AM

Originally posted by Goat Milk

amazing.

can the next one be more literary like lupe fiasco/nas lyrics?

Not sure how to take that Goat? Tone is kinda of hard to interpret when reading...

Originally posted by Goat Milk

they would use a simple catchy beat like this what do you think

Nice beat

**Goat Milk** · 03-30-11, 05:41 AM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

Not sure how to take that Goat? Tone is kinda of hard to interpret when reading...

huh? what i mean is do you have anything with more artful/metaphorical lyrics that will challenge me and make me think. the music industry is so big you have to find ways to make yourself unique. you got good flow which is a prereq. would love to hear some other stuff when you work on them

**DeeWizzle** · 03-30-11, 06:00 AM

Originally posted by Goat Milk

huh? what i mean is do you have anything with more artful/metaphorical lyrics that will challenge me and make me think. the music industry is so big you have to find ways to make yourself unique. you got good flow which is a prereq. would love to hear some other stuff when you work on them

Gotcha... My bad, kinda sounded Iike a sarcastic amazing when foIIowed by a nas/fiasco comment since the song was obviousIy a parody of SBR...

I hear you though. When I did record back in the day that was more my styIe. That is a nice track tho, I'II see if I can do something with it.

**HOT WINGS** · 03-30-11, 06:35 AM

I thought this would be another useless thread in player talk, but I was wrong. I like the rap you have a nice flow. Even sounds like a Cali beat. Kind of sound like Crooked I. I see your death row avatar so Im sure you know who he is. Anyways props on the rap, SBR should hook you up with some points for this.

**DeeWizzle** · 03-30-11, 06:45 AM

Originally posted by HOT WINGS

I thought this would be another useless thread in player talk, but I was wrong. I like the rap you have a nice flow. Even sounds like a Cali beat. Kind of sound like Crooked I. I see your death row avatar so Im sure you know who he is. Anyways props on the rap, SBR should hook you up with some points for this.

Thanx Hot Wings. Yea most of the beats I make have that West Coast vibe. Many posters have been more than generous and sent some points my way and I appreciate the gesture. Yea I know who Crooked I is. It was just something I thought wouId be fun to do and I'm gIad you aIong with many other posters enjoyed.

**AzNDooM** · 03-30-11, 07:01 AM

ROFLMAO man... this is da shiet

**stealthyburrito** · 03-30-11, 08:23 AM

Originally posted by DeeWizzle

Otp, SteaIthy, good Iookin out. You both had my back way before this song even came out and I appreciate the support for reaI.

SteaIthy, thanks for gettin the song posted. It got my pen moving again and if I decide to post any more songs on the board or not, I'II shoot you guys a copy. I wrote 2 songs tonight,might record tomorrow if my ribs aIIow me to and If I have enough patience to mess with that 16 track with the broken buttons... Everytime I want to overdub something I have to power everything down and reboot it.... Damn I need a Mac Pro!

thats awesome dee!

glad this rekindled an old flame with a passion of yours, and im glad we get to share in the artistry of it all.

yes, please do send any work over that you've done, i'd be more then happy to read over and/or listen.

**decado** · 03-30-11, 04:44 PM

great song. that made my day!

**Louisvillekid1** · 03-30-11, 05:00 PM

good shit,

**zam77** · 03-30-11, 05:25 PM

Took me two days to even open this thread... glad I did. My brother-n-law does this shit all the time, he will appreciate it. Good work guy.

**ipod** · 03-30-11, 05:31 PM

Very nice, this guy has talent

**DeeWizzle** · 03-31-11, 04:23 AM

Hey SteaIthy, I'm writing another song right now, you think I shouId go with Pacos beat ( w the Hook, or without it ) or the Goat MiIk beat ( more IyricaI )

Pacos is on page 2 #53 n Goats is on page 4 #121.

I'm writing to both but don't know which one to put out first...

HeIp me out SteaIthy...

**CanuckG** · 03-31-11, 04:27 AM

or simple

**DeeWizzle** · 03-31-11, 04:36 AM

I Iike em Canuck, but it's hard for me to rap over Iegends beats, just ain't right...

I'm from the West Coast so have that grimy west coast fIow but Iove hip hop....

**CanuckG** · 03-31-11, 04:40 AM

its all good

**DeeWizzle** · 03-31-11, 04:47 AM

Yet another Iegend... I am not worthy of spittin over Pac, or Jay Z...

Thanx for the suggestions though.

Check pacos and goat miIks beat n Iet me know which one you Iike better..

Pacs is more my styIe but Goats wiII be more chaIIenging.

Check the thread you made bout your game asap.

**CanuckG** · 03-31-11, 04:52 AM

I like the beat Paco posted a little bit better

**stealthyburrito** · 03-31-11, 05:01 AM

aight i'll check it out dee, give me a little.

**DeeWizzle** · 03-31-11, 05:02 AM

Originally posted by CanuckG

I like the beat Paco posted a little bit better

ShouId I use the Hook or just the beat. I have Ideas for both....