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Quck help please...anyone whose literate
Am i wording this properly? I know we have a few gentleman and woman scholers on here...help me out please below:
I have all the experience you are looking for, and more as I have a Bachelor of the Arts Degree from Rider University in Communications.
Is that comma placed correctly??? and do I say Bachelor of the arts degree??? or as I have a Bachelor's Arts degree....i'm feeling a lil clumsy right now and i'm submitting a resume to a few places...obviously english was not my major
Thanks
That comma is not placed correctly. The comma would be placed after more.
Correct: Bachelor of Arts
That said, I don't think you will be getting the job.
comma is fine......get rid of the "and more"
Also tell them you have never taken a shitt on company time.
or is this the best way???
I have all the experience you are looking for along with a Bachelor of Arts Degree from Rider University in Communications.
I like this better.Originally Posted by EDDIE MONEY LINE
Has a degree but doesn't know where the comma goes...
Welcome to the new America!!!!!
Deuce, that college conspiracy video is looking more and more believable....
What is the context? This statement just makes you look like a retard. No, I wouldn't put it that way.
The 2nd one is definitely better.
That being said, I think you could word this whole thing considerably better. If you're serious about this resume, pm me. I have some resources I could give you that might help.
SBR
Poster of
Year
2011
if this comes across my desk, i will rip it up
good luck!
Both these corrections
ok...before I send it here it is...let me know
anyone in HR out there???? Does this sound cheesy or is it attention grabbing???
Good evening,
You described me in your sales consultant job posting in the Sunday Times Union so I have attached a pdf and word file of my resume for your viewing pleasure. Although currently employed I am looking to work for a company that has opportunities for career growth. I have all the experience you are looking for along with a Bachelor of Arts Degree from Rider University in Communications. I hope to hear from you soon regarding an interview for this position. I can be reached at......(can't let u sick fuks know...haha).
Sincerly,
Eddie Money Line
Jesus Christ.
Shoot opie a PM. You need some serious help.
this isn't a cover letter or anything, just going to be the body of email I send...is it alright???
This is way better.
But I don't like the "I have all the experience you are looking for" Why not just list what you've done which relates to the position you're looking to get into.
But then again I'm guessing this is just an email sent to the company, and all the info on your "experience" is listed in the resume. If that's the case it looks good then.
Ya, just a quick note in email to grip attention to not delete, and then look at my resume
damn, no offense, but i can see now the difference between rider and a top notch school, like the one i went to.
would u really send that to a prospective employer?? or just joking?
I was just trying to be down to earth and appeal to the person in HR whpo opens this...pm me with something better please.
After reading that I would probably delete your application Eddie. It is not very professional, if you do currently have a job and it is related to the type of job you are applying for then describe it in the opening to catch their attention.
i got your back here eddie
we will fix this. sbr teamwork
The first sentence is a run-on sentence. The employer won't read past there.
The first step in becoming a Scholar is learning how to spell it correctly.
Pay someone to do this for you
ya i kinda threw myself out there...it didn't look right, but I didn't spell check obviously
i'm not helpless. all i need is to solidify the interview and i'll get the job. i have a good success rate
I have all the experience you are looking for; Furthermore I have a Bachelor of the Arts Degree from Rider University in Communications.
Would be the good corrected version, may aye po1nt out that, if you're saying ""ALL"" the experience you should add more than one (with ur one being having a bachelor of arts)
The ; mark is very important
no comma in front of the and.
P.S. your degree is worthless. Same as mine.
No, that's completely wrong. Semicolons are followed by a lower case letter. And if you wanted to use a semicolon in that sentence (which is unnecessary), a comma would have to follow furthermore. Don't give out grammar advice if you don't understand proper grammar.
how about this: I gots plenty of experidents and sells more gooder than anyone. Moreover, I have a degree also as well showing that I communicate good
thanks for all the help and support guys. have a good night!!!
Like the padres, not very impressed.
"You described me in your sales consultant job posting in the Sunday Times Union so I have attached a pdf and word file of my resume for your viewing pleasure"
This sentence makes no sense.
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