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    pokerwhiz90
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    Chicago Bulls - Good Write Up

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    Hey SBR,

    I know you guys know that I've been active in this forum and supportive. I just wanted to submit a good article that I wrote up on the Chicago Bulls, and I think it's really helpful to know some of the figures and stats I wrote in the articles when you consider betting on the Bulls.

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    thank you, friend.

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    no problem baldur! i've learned a lot from this forum too! Handicapping has made me a better analyst and sports mind.

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    Do you guys think I should continue this thread or start a new thread about my NBA analysis?

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    Whats the purpose of the article?

    Just a write up about the Bulls?

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    I agree. No offense, but you could organize your writing a little better. Remember, clearly set your theme for the article in the introduction, then support it with facts, set forth your analysis of the facts and then end with a conclusion which supports your overall theme.

    Good luck!

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    You can also be bias by throwing in a few hidden key lines to who you think you will favor in such games. Just like a painting by an artist. They have hidden clues thus why each artist have their own styles.

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    yup, just a write up about the bulls, if anyone is on the procomputergambler site, my articles will be on there and a few other sites as well too

    thanks for the good advice though, real supportive here
    ill continue to post articles and work on my writing - i was trying my best to incorporate subplots into the bulls/heat article

    just wanted to share something since i've been following the nba closely

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